Here is some feedback from target audience's that will help me make a final succesful ancillary task:
Eden: The solo shots are very effective as they are all clear and making eye contact with the audience, however I think they could be placed differently as I feel they looked squashed.
Kieran: I like how the lyrics are layed out but I don't like how the images have been structured I think they look messy.
Harry: I think they follow conventions as you have put the lyrics in the right place as well as the images but I think it needs to be rearranged to make it look more professional.
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